Hillary Kiline is a superb candidate. She is intellectually engaging and pursues a wide range of studies including AP classes in Calculus, English, government, and US History. She presently has a 4.6 GPA and is ranked among the top four students in her class of 100. She particularly enjoys creative writing and composes both poetry and short stories. Her perception and eye for detail are clear in her vibrant and incisive remarks about human nature. She loves theater. She has pursued her interest in drama and participates in High School and Community Theater. She has been a member of the cast of every production, theatrical or musical, during her four years at Springfield High School. During the summer she participates in Springfield Community productions. She hopes to continue her involvement in theater at Dartmouth.
2. Commitment and Personal Motivation in Activities对活动的投入和动机
Hillary is a thoughtful and strongly optimistic young woman. She has been President of her class for four years and enjoys the responsibilities and opportunities afforded her as a class leader. She is captain of the soccer team for the second year in a row. Her team reached the third round of the state championship this year before being eliminated by the team that went on to win the championship. She was also a member of the 2002 all-star district team.
翻译:Hillary是一个有思想、非常乐观的年轻女性。她连续四年担任班长,并非常珍惜作为一个班级的领导的责任和机会。同时,她已是连续第二年担任足球队队长。在卸任之前,她带领的球队冲进了国家锦标赛的第三轮并最终赢得了这一年的冠军,她也是2002全明星区团队的一员。
She recently played an integral role as part of a team applying for a Venture Capital Grant to benefit her high school. She, the principal, the Superintendent and a teacher were interviewed in the state competition. She noted that her school was the only one competing that included a student on its team. Their school also won the competition and the Grant. The money will be used to develop and support a mentoring program which she helped design.
Hillary is an extraordinarily mature young woman. Ben Geiger and I were extremely struck by her eloquence and poise. She comes from a very close family of three children. Her older brother is a freshman at Harvard. Her younger sister is also in High School.
She spoke with warmth and admiration for her parents and of their integrity. They have raised her in an atmosphere of trust, allowing her broad freedom to make her own decisions. The result is an engaging, intelligent, confident young woman who handles the challenges placed before her with aplomb.
4. Summary Analysis总结分析 Hillary is clearly an outstanding candidate. She thought carefully about her choice of Dartmouth. She hopes to participate in theater, choral groups, soccer, and to study languages. She is interested in the Theater Program abroad as well as the possibility of spending a term in Italy to study Italian. Most of all she looks forward to the intellectual opportunities. She envisions Dartmouth as a “world of opportunity, with an open intellectual atmosphere where people want to share ideas and engage in discussions.” She is a marvelous candidate and we strongly encourage you to offer her admission.
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